「贷款加盟」上海高中入学考试作文145分英语低年级到A年级，我喜欢工作5

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上海高中入学考试作文145分英语低年级到A年级，我喜欢工作5

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  Ifyoulovetodesignnewbuildingsanddrawpictures,engineerisabefittingjobforyou.Asadesignerofbuildings,youcan'tonlydrawahouse,butalsoneedtocareaboutitsheight,wideness,thenumberoffloorsandsoon.Thenyoumustwriteallthedataanddetailsonthepaper.Youshouldhaveacreativeheartanddifferentideassothatmorepeoplecanbeattractedbythebuildingsyouhavedesigned.Engineerisalsomyfavoritejob,Ithinkthisworkwillenrichmyimaginationandthesesuccessfulbuildingsmakemefeelproud.Socomeontohaveatry.

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  Ifyoulovetodesignnewbuildingsanddrawpictures,engineerissuitableforyou.Asadesignerofbuildings,whenyoudrawtheplansofhouses,youneedtocareaboutitsheight,width,thenumberoffloorsandsoon.Thenyoumusttakeallofthemintoaccount.Besides,agooddesignershouldhaveacreativemindanddifferentideas/shouldbecreativeandfullofdifferentideassothatmorepeoplecanbeattractedbythebuildingsyouhavedesigned.Engineerisalsomyfavoritejob,Ithinkthisworkwillenrichmyimaginationandmakemefeelproudofmysuccessfulbuildings.Socomeontohaveatry./Whynothaveatry.